The Tim Hortons incident

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It all started when we were going to Tim Hortons with Brad we were done swimming at a public pool and we decided to use our money at Tim Hortons us Melis and Al went to Tim Hortons after swimming and were tired when we were there we bought some food and we saw this woman she was shouting at people and we Al tried to ask her why she was doing that and she Shouted at him and she started to bite Melis’ arms like some sort of zombie and was throwing chairs at us Brad and Daw were terrified she kept biting Melis’ arms Brad covered his eyes while the woman kept going Psycho and we eventually left the Tim Hortons and Brad and Daw will never go to that Tim Hortons ever again

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Your story needs paragraphs and punctuation – Reading this gave me a headache.