The Man at the Door

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Hi My name is Tory and this is about one of my scariest sleep overs. I was 10 when this happened. Ok lets start!

It was 5:00 pm and I was getting ready to have sleepover with a few friends. The sleepover starts at 5:30 and I had to get snacks,games,and movies ready. It was time to start the sleepover. The first two girls that got there were Lizeth and Haley. They both had their bags and some games. I said “hey guys come in yall can go and put the games on the table” then lizeth said “ok this is going to be so much fun!!” The girls went in and headed in the kitchen to put the games on the table. T

hen I said “yall can get a little bit of the snacks we have to save some for the other girls.” The lizeth got some of the apples and grapes. The apples were as red as a red ball and the grapes tasted like a candy. Hailey got some of the chips.

The chips where doritos,potato chips,and cheetos. Then I heard the doorbell and it was paris and angelina. Paris said “hey are we here late or early?” I said “no yall are on time yall can go in and get some snacks and relax” The girls went in and got some snacks. After 2 minutes the last girl was at the door. Shayenne was at the door I went to the door and said “hey and welcome you can go and get some snacks and relax i’ll be in there in a minute” She said “ok hurry SO WE CAN GET THIS PARTY STARTED!!!!”

She went in and I went to her room to make sure all the games and things were in the right places. After that I

Went in the living room where the girls were. “Ok girls what do y’all what to do first games,or watch a movie?” The girls all said “games” so they played truth or dare. I was up first paris asked her “truth or dare” I said “truth.” Then paris said “ok um.. Is it true that you have NEVER been on a rollercoaster before?” I said “yes that is true” Then it was My turn to pick. The game went on for almost an hour. After the game the girls had more snacks and played another game then had a singing contest. Me and paris won.

Then the girls watched a movie. My parents where out of town so the girls were home alone. After the first movie was over i put on another. It was 8:30 when lizeth looked out the window and saw someone standing across the road and said “g-girls do yall see that person…!!”

All the girls looked out the window and saw the person standing on the other side of the road and freaked out! I said “girls did we lock the door?!?!?” All the girls said “oh no” The girls rushed out the room and went in the living room and sat on the floor to talk. I said “ok i’m going to lock the front door and who wants to lock the backdoor?” Angelina said “i will” I told the other girls to stay there. I went and locked the front door and looked out the window and saw the man outside still. After she did that she went over to the girls and said “that man is still out there!” I and the girls got some snacks and went in my room.

Paris locked the door and windows. Hailey said “i’m really scared are yall?” All the girls said “yes!” After 20 min or longer payton looked outside the window and saw a car stop at the her house and screamed. All the girls said “WHAT!!” I said “a car stopped in front of the house!!” The girls looked and saw the car drive away. “Yay they are leaving!!” After like 5 min they hear a knock on the door and freak out. I said “should we all go or just me?” The girls said “all of us!” All the girls went to the door. The door has a screen door that I locked. I looks out the window and sees a man at the door. I tells the girls it’s a man. The girls started to get very scared. Then lizeth says “why is he here?” The man sees me at the door and walks of. So when I looks again I sees that the man is gone and said “he’s gone!”

The girls don’t know what to do so I says “let’s just go back to my room and watch that movie” the girls all said yes so they go back to my room and continued to watch the movie. All the girls were to scared to go to sleep so they stayed up until it was midnight and all the girl started to fall asleep. In the morning the girls talked about what happened last night.

After that the girls ate breakfast and all the girls got their stuff ready to go. While the girls waited for their parents the girls watched a movie and talked. Paris was the first to go, then shannan. After they left more girls left lizeth was the last. My parents got home and she told them what happened.


Please kids be careful.

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